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I shuck myself from the couch. Great sorrows fall from my hair. This steady pain, you fill it. She tells me to feed a cold, starve a fever, and I do it backwards. I love my loved ones upside down. I...
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I like this. a lot Seasons do fall on us. we are all bombed out bridges... ....yup gotta agree with that too sometimes sometimes we're the bomb though looking for the person out there who is our...
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reading your poetry is like panning for gold - i always find such sparkling phrases as "crossed the world on a leopard wearing human flesh as a t-shirt." and "Keep me full as a city elevator". i'd...
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a really niggly nit - you have a split infinitive "but to just stand there" - change to " but just to stand there"
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